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Submitted: January 7
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Usagimochiby ~NachoPenguin

Manga & Anime / Digital Media / Drawings

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drawing for me. I saw it and immediately thought of this scene with little mochi bunnies flying around ;3;

Here's what he drew for me:

I love it so much, it's so cute. Thank you for the inspiration >3<

-Edited- Some minor fixes.

Critique by =Rhuni Jan 7, 2013, 2:16:56 AM

_{Anatomy:
The first thing that I noticed was that the legs were far too long, the ankles should be visible in the image and that there is no knees. Either the body should be aimed a little more backwards OR a little bit of the hammer should be showing and the body should be a little bit more forward. As the way the way the arms were drawn made no room for the forearms. The left eye conflicts with hair a bit, the eye should be erased where the hair covers it. One last thing on anatomy, the hair at the back of the head should be drawn a bit longer otherwise she would have uneven hair and comparing it to the reference, it should have been much much longer.

Lineart:
You drew the line art very consistent throughout the entire image, so I honestly don't have much to say about it.

Colouring:
Your colouring is very good, but the first thing I noticed was the inconsistent colouring style. There is soft shading in some places but then it seems like you forgot to add in that little bit of cell shading like you did in most of the image.}

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~4mmoh Jan 19, 2013

Whoa, I like the colors (the pink mochi looks tasty)
and how you made the hair, necklace and mochi jumpy
really make it look dynamic. Your coloring and lighting improved greatly
and I know you'll get better. Anatomy wise, I can't tell since
it's being blocked so if you want to improve, I suggest more poses at
different angles instead of straight on. The background is beautiful but it's also
really bright and not much contrast to the girl. Amazing job still (and hope
you get to eat a lot of mochi this new year!)

~NachoPenguin Feb 3, 2013 Student Digital Artist

Thank you so much!!! XD And I have SOO MUCH I can't even begin to finish the Mochi. And I'll remember that. ;3; I always draw poses straight on Boo. I should try more different poses you are 100% right!